tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36498913.post8009696622038373482..comments2023-09-24T07:03:54.781-04:00Comments on Write? I am: An excerpt for MaryKeziah Fentonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07938311968836003221noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36498913.post-54028559447103060502007-05-11T04:17:00.000-04:002007-05-11T04:17:00.000-04:00i'm with lou. *claps hands* write write write, dam...i'm with lou. <BR/><BR/>*claps hands* write write write, dammit. (can you tell i was never a cheerleader?)<BR/><BR/>-OHAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36498913.post-32520000935440328642007-05-03T18:58:00.000-04:002007-05-03T18:58:00.000-04:00Huh, in your previous post you mentioned tornados ...Huh, in your previous post you mentioned tornados and trailer parks....<BR/><BR/>then...<BR/><BR/>you give us this great scene - and it's not even part of the story. Huh...<BR/><BR/>Great description of Alex's moment, I could feel every bit of it. If you would finish, to quote McB, "the damned story," we could go out and - I don't know - BUY IT. Move it chica, move it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36498913.post-83846104630160120552007-05-02T23:27:00.000-04:002007-05-02T23:27:00.000-04:00My name is NOT Mary and I read it anyways. Neener...My name is NOT Mary and I read it anyways. Neener, neener, neener!<BR/><BR/>I echo the thoughts: if that is what was cut, I can't wait for the keepers. You had me sucked in right away.<BR/><BR/>Carry on, please!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36498913.post-44675333219758532132007-05-02T23:13:00.000-04:002007-05-02T23:13:00.000-04:00Seriously, this no longer fits in the story. This ...Seriously, this no longer fits in the story. This is backstory(plus Nea doesn't walk out of his life). No need to show it.<BR/><BR/>I've written two novels and gone back to this one in those seven years. Sheesh, I'm not <I>that</I> slow. And all this healthy competition has got me writing every day on Alex's story. I do love Alex. If he were real...Keziah Fentonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07938311968836003221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36498913.post-84698965027508899662007-05-02T22:14:00.000-04:002007-05-02T22:14:00.000-04:00Look away, she says. Right.And you deleted this WH...<I>Look away</I>, she says. Right.<BR/><BR/>And you deleted this WHY?<BR/><BR/>Can't wait to read the stuff you kept. Seven years is way too long, Sheryl. Geez. Get busy and finish it, already, woman.<BR/><BR/>Stop holding back and just write the damn story. The rest will sort itself out. Really. Have a little faith.BCBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03073904727232797021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36498913.post-43510286452462530802007-05-02T21:30:00.000-04:002007-05-02T21:30:00.000-04:00Sheryl, that was cool! I could feel the rush of wi...Sheryl, that was <I>cool</I>! I could feel the rush of wind, the anticipated exhilaration and the realization instead of how he'd changed. <BR/>Whaddya mean that's a deleted scene? Okay, I know, kill your darlings. But that just means we needs to see the rest of it. I can understand that might mean waiting until it's published. I can wait. Really. It's no problem.<BR/><I>Taps her foot impatiently.</I><BR/><BR/>And yes, thank you for sharing!The Merryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09660495393832517684noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36498913.post-76354874145608865302007-05-02T15:21:00.000-04:002007-05-02T15:21:00.000-04:00well, i was going to read it, but since it's just ...well, i was going to read it, but since it's just for mary...please, who are you kidding?<BR/><BR/>you kick ass, that's for sure. <BR/><BR/>now where's the rest of the story? oh, you're posting it up next? cool.<BR/><BR/>-OHAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36498913.post-24494054442229819692007-05-02T11:16:00.000-04:002007-05-02T11:16:00.000-04:00Ooooh excerpts. I like excerpts. I like them eve...Ooooh excerpts. I like excerpts. I like them even better when the rest of the damn story is attached. <BR/><BR/>Where's the rest of the damned story!McBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01437136297944260051noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36498913.post-40002271314110502312007-05-02T11:11:00.000-04:002007-05-02T11:11:00.000-04:00Sorry, but I looked. :-)I like it! So who/what wal...Sorry, but I looked. :-)<BR/><BR/>I like it! So who/what walked out of his life? Was it glittery? And are you saying he isn't this thrill-seeking daredevil anymore? I want to know more, like how he's changed and who he is now and if he misses who he was and...<BR/><BR/>You've given a junkie a hit then walked away. You big tease. :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36498913.post-35015885119755132782007-05-02T10:40:00.000-04:002007-05-02T10:40:00.000-04:00ooo ooo ooo.I'm the first to say.....WONDERFUL. Lo...ooo ooo ooo.<BR/>I'm the first to say.....<BR/>WONDERFUL. <BR/>Love it. Really do.<BR/>And how can you even joke about not being a good writer? <BR/>Some people are just nuts.<BR/>(Yeah, I['m talking about YOU here!)<BR/>Love ya, chick.deehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16106567263422534862noreply@blogger.com